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PostSubject: Kogane No Ko (黄金の子)   Thu Jun 04, 2015 1:12 am

Basics
Full Name: Kogane No Ko (黄金の子)
Meaning of Name: "Child of Gold" or "golden Child"
*Nickname(s): n/a
*Alias(es): n/a
*Sexuality: Bisexual
Sex: Female
Species: Dragon.

Dragon Information
Stage of Life: Elder- unknown age.
Region: Asian (Rarity Dragon even in this region)
Type: Metallic
Rank: Elder
Description: These are also extremely rare. They have brilliant golden colored scales and their spines and horns are only slightly paler. There is a lot of misconception about gold dragons; people seem to think that all golds are queens. Golds, like all the others, can be male or female. Although female is more common.

Human Appearance
Age: 25
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Type of Build/Body: Hourglass
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 120 lbs
Distinguishing Marks: Her hair is extravagant it literally glows a bright golden color when she allows it...

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True Appearance
Eye Color: Blue
Scale Color: Golden
Type of Build/Body: Thin and agile but exceptionally large even for Elder dragons.
Height:
Weight:
Distinguishing Marks: Beautiful golden scales and a thin snout.

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Attitude/Personality: She is rather protective of herself and people she cares about.... She has five eggs but with her species of dragon it takes one-thousand years for them to hatch.... In the meantime she sings at bars to make a little money and fix up her den she made her nest in a apartment that was given to her so she could safely hide her eggs... Her most common bar to sing at requires her to wear wings on the back of her uniform so the few times she is seen in human form she often has the wings on her back.... Her species is growing extinct very fast so she is often on edge.... There are very few dragons of her species left let alone males so her eggs hatching are the major priority in her life, should something happen to her eggs she is liable to go on a rampage.... Just like any mother she guards them nightly and nurtures her eggs closely..... She is very kind yet she can be intimidating.... She tries not to lat people see her den no one since her eggs were conceived five-hundred years ago has ever seen her eggs.... Not even once... Her voice is heavenly and she uses that to her advantage... When she sings at bars it is typically at strip clubs because they pay the most... Due to that she is often thought to be a stripper even though at most she is a bartender/performer...

Spells
[*]Draconic Infusion- The user can infuse objects (usually a weapon), beings or powers with draconic power, empowering and energizing them and allowing the user to manipulate their qualities and efficiency.
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  • Animal Allegiance- A spell for help from the beasts of the wild, who come to fight in your defense.


  • Aura Whisper- A spell that reveals the life forces of any and all around the caster.


  • Battle Fury- A spell that enchants your nearby allies' weapons, allowing them to attack faster.


  • Bend Will- Your voice bends the very stones to your will. As it gains power, animals, people, and even werewolves must do your bidding.


  • Clear Skies- A spell that will clear away fog and inclement weather.


  • Cyclone- A spell that summons a whirling cyclone that sows chaos among your enemies.


  • Disarm- a spell that will rip the weapon from an opponent's grasp.


  • Dismay- a spell that, when cast, will cause the weak  to tremble and flee in terror.


  • Drain Vitality- A spell that will coax both magical and mortal energies from your hapless opponent.


  • Valmaceid- A spell which has high defensive properties against the elements of earth, water, fire, and wind. It is possible to enchant armor with this spell. However, the components required for the casting of the spell are expensive.


  • Vas Gluudo- A spell which creates a magic barrier the size of a small shield.


  • Recovery- Can be cast as either Share Fatigue, Minor Healing, Major Healing, or Great Healing


  • Resurrection- Major Healing variant.


  • Raphas Seed- This spell can completely prevent a target from moving by entangling them within magical ropes.


  • Flow Break- Dispel  other types of magic.


  • Disenchant (kaiju)- Spell which negates the effect of curses and spells with a duration (sleep, control, etc). Can only be used by high-level priests.


  • Dicleary (Detoxify)- Cleansing spell that will remove toxins from the body.


  • Frenzy- Drives target stack of creatures frenzy. Frenzied stack considers all other creatures and war machines its personal enemies and attacks the nearest one with redoubled rage.


  • Suffering- Weakens the target enemy unit to decrease its Attack.


  • Confusion- Makes creatures in target enemy stack forget what they are doing on a battlefield. Some of the affected creatures will forget to use shooting attacks and retaliation strikes. (The spell does not work on undead, elemental and mechanical units.)


  • Vulnerability- Destroys armor of the target, reducing their defense. Can be cast several times on a single stack, but defense will not go lower once the target reaches their lowest point.


  • Decay-  Corrupts the ground targeted by the caster, causing anything the spell touches to begin to decay.


  • Eldritch Arrow- Shoots magic missile to deal non-physical damage to the selected enemy creature.


  • Asha Uses All- The caster gains energy for each ally or enemy destroyed during combat.


  • Sorrow- Decreases morale and luck of selected enemy creature.


  • Weakness- Causes the selected enemy unit to inflict less damage in combat. Spellpower determines the duration of effect.

    Abilities
    *Special Abilities:

    • Lung Adaption- The user’s lungs acclimatize and breathe in/on any gaseous mediums, whether hostile or deficient, users lungs also filter away non-gaseous substances such as dust, asbestos, etc. They can breathe toxic gases instead of oxygen and survive mountain, aerial, or terrene air deficiency, which are among the longest and most painful deaths the average human can suffer.



    • Semi-Immortality- Users of this ability never age, and as a result, they stay young forever or at least never suffer the ravages of aging. Because of this, the user will always be at their physical prime. The user will also be immune to aging abilities, such as Age Acceleration or Reversal.



    • Longevity- The user either ages slower than normal for their species or is of the species that have extended life-span.



    • Armored Skin- The users has or can generate an innate armor as a part of their body, which is resistant to attacks, harm or pain and temperature extremes. The armor varies from obvious, physical defenses, such as scales, thick skin/fur, natural shield, armor or shell, in-organic skin, etc, to bone-nodules below skin, particularly wide/sturdy rib-cake, blubber, or simply dense muscle.




      • Elemental Breath- The user can project blasts of elemental force in their lungs in a way that allows them to shape it into bursts, streams, spheres or mist of elemental force from the mouth.


      • Light Devourer- Her species of dragon has the ability to eat light however when she devours light she cannot do it again for about six months. She uses the light to feed her eggs and to retain her powers.


      • Energy Breath- The user is capable of projecting energy blasts from their mouth. Said energy can either be simple or continuous beams.


      • Enhanced Durability- The user's physical durability (ability to endure/resist damage) is extremely high, allowing them to take numerous blows of internal or external assaults before succumbing to the effects.


      • Enhanced Stamina- Users can operate on a low power setting, allowing them to operate for an extended amount of time. They can hold their breath for longer periods of time and remain calm through stressful or painful situations, tolerate extreme hunger, unbearable thirst, and strong urges to sleep.


      • Enhanced Intelligence- The user has intelligence that is significantly above standard genius level intellect. One is gifted with higher mental faculties such as a more powerful memory, better calculation skills, greater reasoning skills, and a more superior learning capacity. At this stage, an individual can often come up with unique and original ideas that elevates the thinking of humanity to new levels.


      • Enhanced Strength- Users have incredible ability to defy weight limitations of the member of their race, but not completely break them. Dense, lengthy, or overweight items are easy to move and simple to use in nearly any manner. Users can crush, lift, throw, or catch items of great weight.


      • Enhanced Vision- Users have eyes enhanced to see with amazing clarity/detail, distance, or color, perhaps even in a different spectrum of light or into another dimension.


      • Fear Masking- The user is capable of suppressing their fear and drawing upon superhuman reserves of courage and/or fearlessness allowing them to act/react normally in dangerous situations like combat, rescue operations, etc.


      • Flight- User can fly or otherwise move through the air using varying methods. Some possibilities include using one or more forms of energy, wings or similar structures, or even mimicking or becoming an animal that can fly. Users are generally able to Levitate, and Glide as well.


      • Magic Immunity- The user is invulnerable to most, if not all, forms of magic and magical powers. Advanced users may be able to select which spells they can be affected by.


      • Natural Weapons- The user possesses some form of natural weaponry, including claws, fangs, horns, beaks, clubbed tails, etc., and know how to use them.


      • Omnilingualism- User can speak, write, understand and communicate in any language including computer codes, languages they have never been heard before, sign language (even lip-reading), illegible words, and backwards speech and writing with little or no training. User may even communicate with animals or read body language. This ability works by either or both of two faculties:


      • Linguistic Assimilation- know another one's language through physical contact.


      • Projective Omnilingualism- emit a field that translates every language spoken inside the it, causing everyone understand what others are speaking.


      • Regenerative Healing Factor- The user can rapidly regenerate, in other words, they recreate lost or damaged tissues, organs and limbs, sometimes slowing, or even stopping, aging. The rate and amount of healing varies widely (see Levels of Regeneration), some can regrow missing limbs, others must put the limb back in place for rapid regeneration. They are generally in very good physical shape as their bodies are constantly reverting to healthy state.

      *Other: (any other information you may want to include)BackgroundHistory: Kogane is a rare breed of dragon that eats light every six months and gives birth every one thousand years.... She has lived for many, many years and has watched the ages go by.... In her younger days she often spent her time near a beautiful hidden grove that her mate had created for her, to keep her and her eggs safe.... That is until humans tore it down and started stealing the land for development... It forced her to take her eggs and flee... Among those humans was a very powerful one with enough strength to destroy even the mightiest of dragons.... Her mate was considered a Legendary Dragon and was yet soundly defeated.... He inevitably forced her out of her home and she had to flee to a place safe.... She ran into a friend she had met a few years prior... This woman was a vampire that owned a big abandoned apartment building....  With her help she made a new den and spent the rest of her time preparing for the birth of her children absent her loving mate.... She is gente by nature and through the years never once blamed the humans for his death but more so blamed the expansionist mind set of those humans.... As with time her friend died and she is currently all alone guarding her precious children until they hatch in the same den she and her friend had made....


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PostSubject: Re: Kogane No Ko (黄金の子)   Fri Jun 05, 2015 1:31 am

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Dragon Information
Stage of Life: Elder- unknown age.

For the first thing that I'd like to point out, there is a specific place on the guide for dragons that explains this. There are also stages of life listed in the application. Her stage of life wouldn't be Elder, it would be Adult.

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Distinguishing Marks: Her hair is extravagant it literally glows a bright golden color when she allows it...

Next, I would like to point out that there is not any possible way that her hair would glow. She's not a goddess or any type of life form that would have any part of her body that glows aside from maybe her eyes in a low light setting. However, her scales, due to her metallic properties, would shimmer when the light hits them just right.

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True Appearance
Type of Build/Body: Thin and agile but exceptionally large even for Elder dragons.
Height:
Weight:

Even if she's described as being large in her body type, the height and weight portion of this section must be filled out. Prove why she's large for an Elder dragon.

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Attitude/Personality: She is rather protective of herself and people she cares about.... She has five eggs but with her species of dragon it takes one-thousand years for them to hatch.... In the meantime, she sings at bars to make a little money and fix up her den she made her nest in a apartment that was given to her so she could safely hide her eggs... Her most common bar to sing at requires her to wear wings on the back of her uniform so the few times she is seen in human form she often has the wings on her back....Her species is growing extinct very fast so she is often on edge....There are very few dragons of her species left let alone males so her eggs hatching are the major priority in her life, should something happen to her eggs she is liable to go on a rampage.... Just like any mother she guards them nightly and nurtures her eggs closely..... She is very kind yet she can be intimidating.... She tries not to let people see her den no one since her eggs were conceived five-hundred years ago has ever seen her eggs.... Not even once... Her voice is heavenly and she uses that to her advantage... When she sings at bars it is typically at strip clubs because they pay the most... Due to that she is often thought to be a stripper even though at most she is a bartender/performer...

There is so much wrong with this section.

First off, no species of dragon takes that long to hatch their young. By that time, the eggs would be fossilized or have rotted. Even with fire, which you have stated that she does not have, wouldn't prevent that.

Secondly, her species isn't ever a species that could exist. Absorbing light would be associated with an earth elemental perhaps, but not a metallic dragon.

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Abilities

  • Light Devourer- Her species of dragon has the ability to eat light however when she devours light she cannot do it again for about six months. She uses the light to feed her eggs and to retain her powers.



  • Linguistic Assimilation- know another one's language through physical contact.



  • Projective Omnilingualism- emit a field that translates every language spoken inside the it, causing everyone understand what others are speaking.

I've already mentioned the light thing, but the other two are just a flat out no.

If a dragon already has the ability to speak and learn every language, she doesn't need the extra two abilities. That's simply making her omnipotent in a round about way.

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History: Kogane is a rare breed of dragon that eats light every six months and gives birth every one thousand years.... She has lived for many, many years and has watched the ages go by.... In her younger days she often spent her time near a beautiful hidden grove that her mate had created for her, to keep her and her eggs safe.... That is until humans tore it down and started stealing the land for development... It forced her to take her eggs and flee... Among those humans was a very powerful one with enough strength to destroy even the mightiest of dragons.... Her mate was considered a Legendary Dragon and was yet soundly defeated.... He inevitably forced her out of her home and she had to flee to a place safe.... She ran into a friend she had met a few years prior... This woman was a vampire that owned a big abandoned apartment building....  With her help she made a new den and spent the rest of her time preparing for the birth of her children absent her loving mate.... She is gente by nature and through the years never once blamed the humans for his death but more so blamed the expansionist mind set of those humans.... As with time her friend died and she is currently all alone guarding her precious children until they hatch in the same den she and her friend had made....

I've already discussed the light and egg issues, but I will restate this. These need to be changed.

Now, I will also take the time to state that there isn't a human in the world strong enough to destroy EVERY dragon. This needs to be changed.

Also, please add more details. You stress details to other members, but have ignored the details in your own application. What's fair for others is fair for you as well.
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